Minor Error; Major Revision

First off, let me say that when one is writing a story based on real life, it is a good idea to do one's research before completing the storyline. Yes, I hate to admit it, but I made a big mistake there. I assumed I knew the behavior and habits of robins and decided to …

Editing Examples

I promised you all some examples of how an article on Deep Character Point of View changed my writing. Here is Part 1 and Part 2 of the article, if you care to read it. Incorporating Deep Character Point of View into my writing means, in a nutshell, that I no longer take the liberty of …

Read the First Chapter!!!

Hello to all! I thought you would enjoy a sneak peak of "Cheeper," so here's the first chapter for you to read and review. Does it leave you itching to read more? Are there any mistakes or potential improvements you noticed? Your feedback is always welcome! Chapter 1: Storm Shimmering rays of late afternoon sunshine beat …